Why use this pattern?
If your service sends an email message to a user after they submit a request or order, the email should only tell the user what they need to know.
Never include personal or sensitive information.
How it works
An email receipt message typically includes the following components:
What they need to do
Don’t explain the whole process, just focus on the simple facts:
- If the user needs to do something after receiving the email, make it clear; and
- If the user needs to do something by a specific date, tell them when it must happen.
What they should expect
If your service requires that the user wait for the government to send them something, such as a vehicle registration or birth certificate tell them when they should expect it.
For example, “You’ll get your vehicle registration in five to 10 business days.”
If a payment was made, what they ordered
If your service takes payment, such as for a fishing licence or camping permit, tell them what they ordered and how much they paid.
Who to contact if they need help
Make it easy for the user by providing an email address or phone number. You can also include a transaction order number or request number, if available.
Who it came from
The name of the service should be in the subject line. This will mean more to the individual than your department name or acronym.
Subject line: Order confirmation: Renew a vehicle registration
This message is to confirm your vehicle registration renewal(s) has been received by the Government of Yukon.
What you need to do
You don’t need to do anything right now.
What will happen next
The decal for your licence plate(s) and registration will be mailed to the address you gave us. Allow for up to 5 to 10 business days to receive the decal for your licence plate(s) and registration through regular mail.
Details of your order
Three vehicle registration renewal(s)
Total paid: $30
If you need help
Email email@example.com or phone 000-000-0000 if assistance is required. Refer to confirmation number ABC123.
Government email accounts
Email messages must always be sent from government email accounts that are regularly checked by staff. Individuals should be able to reply if they have questions or need help. Avoid using firstname.lastname@example.org or other types of “no reply” email accounts.